Lots of Writing Fun!

This week we got the opportunity to elaborate our writing and make it more detailed by using our five senses. Check out some of what we did!

 Sharing our final product of our elaborative details. We changed "One dark night I walked into a haunted house," into an elaborative segment using details!

An example of student writing using elaborative details.

Teacher example of elaborative details.

We ended the week doing virtual writing on a ride at Disneyland, the kids LOVED this! Their writing absolutely amazed all of the 4th grade teachers after they generated a list of the five senses while on the ride.